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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2015 10:19:45 GMT -5
I've been here part of this fed almost a month now. In that time some of you have gotten to know me. Or at least know that my name is Michael. I'm not exactly the most social person in the world - especially if I don't know you. I'm just quiet in general. Unless, you're like Hannah. Then I bug her all the time for the sake of doing so. Anyway with that being said. In the near month I have been here. I have been able to post 7 rps. Been able to compete at two pay per views, been able to win a championship, and slowly becoming part of what might be the biggest storyline for the fed at this moment. To someone that's pretty impressive. However I am my own worst critic and I feel like I could be doing more. I feel like I should be improving. This thread is to see how you guys think I'm doing so far. Not so much feedback on my rps. Though if you want to do that. I'll link them below. Just wanting to see what y'all think. Any advice is welcome and appreciated.
- Michael.
The End Of The Road Senseless Violence Playing Against The Odds The Little Engine That Could Not It's Showtime King Of The Mountain The Rematch
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2015 10:50:29 GMT -5
I will say, I rather enjoy your style and everything you have going for yourself. Your commitment to you character is something I admire because not a lot of people put time into their char outside of the boards which you do. I look forward to see the progression of you and your char here in the EHWF. Solid work. Would totally love to work with you in the future.
Btw Michael nice to meet you, I am Devin
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2015 13:56:09 GMT -5
I see a potential World Champion in you, Harris.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2015 15:40:50 GMT -5
I will say, I rather enjoy your style and everything you have going for yourself. Your commitment to you character is something I admire because not a lot of people put time into their char outside of the boards which you do. I look forward to see the progression of you and your char here in the EHWF. Solid work. Would totally love to work with you in the future. Btw Michael nice to meet you, I am Devin Well first and foremost,
Nice to meet you as well.
And secondly, I am glad that someone enjoys my work. I've been doing this for a really long time and in the time that I've done this. I still second guess myself and I've always been my own worst critic as I said before. I always feel like there's something else I need to do. Something else that needs to be improved on. Of course in this game you can always improve. But as long as someone is being able to enjoy my work and seeing the effort that I put into the character. Both in my rps/in the fed and outside. Then I suppose I can't complain too much. I always aim for others to take joy in my work. Not so much me taking joy from it myself. So thank you for your kind words.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2015 15:41:28 GMT -5
I think you play your character to a T, my man. The dedication you have to Calvin Harris reflects in your promos and it makes me want to tune in every week to see what's going on with him. You take time and effort to construct the world around him and use other characters in his story to shape it.
I'm really impressed with the "new wave" of people that have debuted these passed few months. Like Tyler said, it's a breath of fresh air.
Working with Bloodline will help you even further and the Showtime Championship ain't no joke! STC has only been around for a little bit and it's already a very prestigous belt. Definitely a challenge for the holder. Makes you step your game up every week instead of just at the PPV's.
If you want feedback for a specific promo? PM me bro. I used to do a review thread back in the day and I feel like I give solid advice. Hopefully, a few people here would vouch for that. I don't know when I'll be able to return your PM because I'm going to be out for a few hours tonight, but I'll get it back ASAP.
Welcome to the fed, Calvin! Great job so far man!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2015 15:48:58 GMT -5
I see a potential World Champion in you, Harris. Thank ya sir.
I used to think that Calvin was World Championship material. I spent three years in one of the best feds I have ever been part of and I challenged for the World Championship more times than I can count. Each time I ended up on the losing end. Even though I was close a couple of those times. Granted, I was facing one of the greatest efedders I've ever encounter. One of my best friends in this game. haha. My mentality with Calvin being World Champion has changed because of that. Not sure if it's such a character that can win the big one haha. Though if I was ever in that situation. I wouldn't ever pass it up and I would try my hardest. But thank you for thinking of me in such a light with this character.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2015 20:58:02 GMT -5
I think you play your character to a T, my man. The dedication you have to Calvin Harris reflects in your promos and it makes me want to tune in every week to see what's going on with him. You take time and effort to construct the world around him and use other characters in his story to shape it. I'm really impressed with the "new wave" of people that have debuted these passed few months. Like Tyler said, it's a breath of fresh air. Working with Bloodline will help you even further and the Showtime Championship ain't no joke! STC has only been around for a little bit and it's already a very prestigous belt. Definitely a challenge for the holder. Makes you step your game up every week instead of just at the PPV's. If you want feedback for a specific promo? PM me bro. I used to do a review thread back in the day and I feel like I give solid advice. Hopefully, a few people here would vouch for that. I don't know when I'll be able to return your PM because I'm going to be out for a few hours tonight, but I'll get it back ASAP. Welcome to the fed, Calvin! Great job so far man! The crazy thing that everyone keeps saying is the dedication and the amount of effort I put into the character. When I created Calvin three years ago. I never intended for him to become my main character. I never intended on doing much with him. I created the character for someone I was working with at the time. That's all that Calvin was meant to be. A secondary character that was for someone I was working with. Never had intentions of doing anything more than that, but here I am three years later. Not only is he my main character but my favorite character I have. Out of the 100s upon 100s I have lol.
I've always liked the idea of a championship being defended weekly. Such as a TV Championship or whatever. I just didn't know if I'd like being in that position as the champion where I was the one defending it weekly lol. It is a challenge and it does constantly force you to step your game up every single week. My reign just started as the Showtime Champion and I understand in the short amount of time the championship has picked up some steam. I just hope that I can have a decent run and be able to live up to the expectations of defending it weekly, as well as the expectations of the title in general. And yeah, the Bloodline storyline is sure to launch me. I thought it was a great storyline and a great opportunity for me hence why I jumped on board first chance I got.
And as far as feedback on a specific promo goes. Like, I said in the original post. I was just looking to see what people thought in general of my progression since I joined. I'm not asking anyone to break down a single rp word for word and give me a feedback. I simply posted all my rps just in case someone wanted to give me feedback on their own accord. If ya want to, great. If not, I understand. But for future reference I know that I can go to you if I want feedback for a rp.
Anyway brother, thanks for the compliments!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 9, 2015 11:56:49 GMT -5
I see a potential World Champion in you, Harris. Thank ya sir.
I used to think that Calvin was World Championship material. I spent three years in one of the best feds I have ever been part of and I challenged for the World Championship more times than I can count. Each time I ended up on the losing end. Even though I was close a couple of those times. Granted, I was facing one of the greatest efedders I've ever encounter. One of my best friends in this game. haha. My mentality with Calvin being World Champion has changed because of that. Not sure if it's such a character that can win the big one haha. Though if I was ever in that situation. I wouldn't ever pass it up and I would try my hardest. But thank you for thinking of me in such a light with this character. You came here at a very good time. You were able to establish yourself as a singles competitor, as well as fit yourself into a stable that has two hall of famers and possibly two future hall of famers. Just keep up the hard work and it will eventually pay off. You're off to a tremendous start. I for one am glad that you came to EHWF. I'm looking forward to seeing what you can do down the road once you step into the main-event picture.
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