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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2012 20:01:12 GMT -5
This is my 1st RP with Jason here. I'm still a bit rusty and I just wanted to know what you guys thought. Conviction
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Post by magnus on Apr 10, 2012 9:41:58 GMT -5
Gotta say i'm amazed that your RP has a Table of Contents.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 16:55:18 GMT -5
Don't know how to respond to that......thanks?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 17:47:22 GMT -5
Jason, you've improved since the last time I read one of your roleplays. Gotta say, impressed. Keep it up. Solid work. 8/10. More description and your gonna be a real force.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 20:25:39 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback Alexis. I'll do my best to get more description in. When you say more, do you mean more detailed or just a wider length of desciption?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 20:50:09 GMT -5
Detail, detail, detail lol Detail is the key to roleplaying. We don't have a visual reference. It's not like we're watching a movie so we have to paint the picture. You can say actual "promo talk" is more important and it is important but detail is the key IMO.
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